Wednesday, September 30, 2009

The hidden temple of doom

After publishing a post about a creature, we publish a story about it. Here's our first one!!
Steve was in China. He was staying with a boy named Ling, his mother's best friends son. Ling's father said, "We're going to the hidden forest tomorrow! I'm sure you'll love it, Steve!"
Steve had heard stories about the great hidden forest. He had read about an ancient tribe that worshiped a majestic beast called the were dragon. Their spirits rested in an ancient temple called the hidden temple.
Ling read my mind. "Dream on! You'll never find the temple!"
We left for the forest in the morning.
I was standing at the edge of a cliff. Something was telling me to jump off it. I couldn't control myself, and i jumped. I was about to hit the ground, when a portal opened up in the air and i fell into it. For some reason, I wasn't shocked or scared. I realized that i was in a temple. The temple of doom. For some reason, i wasn't surprised that i had found the temple. Because the spirits had been controlling my mind. They had made me jump off that cliff. They wanted me to set them free from the temple. They had chosen me because my mind was weak, and could easily be controlled. I broke the stone door of the temple and set the spirits free. But before i could leave, the temple guardian, a black wolf, leaped at me and pinned me to the ground. It had sharp claws and sharp teeth. It was about to bite my head off, when the leader of the were dragons shot out a jet of fire that came towards the wolf. It dodged the jet of fire and leaped onto the dragons back, and started tearing off its wings with its deadly claws. blah blah blah im getting bored so i wont type anymore.

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